Showing posts with label essay. Show all posts
Showing posts with label essay. Show all posts

Dec 10, 2008

Essay : Computer

I like computer because we always use computer. Computer is very useful. We have to do a lot of things with computer. I am student, so I have many homework. For example, report, blogging, essay like this. You know. Student is very hard. We have no time. We have to work of part time and we have to play with our friend. We can't pass the class if we don't have computer and internet. Internet is very important comunicat and conect spase. I got email to teachers and friends everyday.

Leaning with Computers

Communication
people new, old
blogging
mail
chat
Information
internt
Serching
Connecting
Connections
Connectivity
Convenience and challenges
Dictionaries
Movies
translation
Shopping
Typing
pictures
Challenges
Typing
Other
Knowledge
Educational games
Other stuff (unsorted)

ful-
helpful
useful

Leaning with Computers

essay
report
listning to music
watching movie
calculation
internet
dictionaries
e-mail
word
copy
shopping
blogging
communication
typing
information
pictures
knowledge
games
talking
useful
translaton
helpful

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Dec 3, 2008

I want you to see Kikuchi city

Do you know Kikuchi city? Kikuchi city has Shisui town, Shichizyou town, Kyokusi village and Kikuchi city. There are a lot of good place.
Shisui town has many hot spring and a Koushi park. Kousi is Chinese thinker. It is like a god now.
Shichizyou town has a lot of hot spring and a dome of melon. It's dome is shopping place of farm products. My friend's father made TOMAPI. TOMAPI is uniting tomato and bell pepper.

Kyokusi village has beautiful source. Kikuchi city has beautiful stream and ravine. I like their good place.

There mountain give us nature water. It is good for health, beauty and mind. Stream make us relax. There town has a lot of old person.

Old person likes hot spring.They can refresh anytime.

Do you know farm products and food of kikuchi. For example, Yakon, rice, melon, milk and a lot of vegetable. Yakon is very famous food of Kikuchi. It is like a potato or Japaneses radish.
We like delicious food. Their is not only delicious but also healthy. We can know mother's taste and dainty.


We can enjoy Kikuchi city. There are a lot of good place. We notice beautiful nature if we go anywhere of Kikuchi city. And we will get beauty and health. Probably we moved local people's kindly.

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Nov 26, 2008

Free writing posts

Do you know Kikuchi city? Kikuchi city has Shisui town, Shichizyou town, Kyokusi village and Kikuchi city. There are a lot of good place.
Shisui town has many hot spring and a Koushi park. Kousi is Chinese thinker. It is like a god now. Shichizyou town has a lot of hot spring and a dome of melon. It's dome is shopping place of farm products. My friend's father made TOMAPI. TOMAPI is uniting tomato and bell pepper. Kyokusi village has beautiful source. Kikuchi city has beautiful stream and ravine. I like their good place.

1.water
mountain give us nature water. It is good for health, beauty and mind. Stream make us relax.

2.hot spring
Relax, health and beauty.


3.farm products and food.
We like delicious food. Their is not only delicious but also healthy. We can know mother's taste and dainty.


We can enjoy Kikuchi city. There are a lot of good place. We notice beautiful nature if we go anywhere of Kikuchi city. And we will get beauty and health. Probably we moved local people's kindly.

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Brainstoming posts

Kikuchi city
Shisui town,
Shichizyou town,
Kyokusi village

hot spring
Koushi park.
a dome of melon.
beautiful source
stream
ravine
water
mountain
relax
healthbeauty
farm products
mother's taste
dainty.

About my Essay

I think my blog is boring, because I do not have skill of web site. Do you have any skills?
I want to write more interesting blog. For example, I stick many animations and listen to music and want to do the decorations of a top screen. What do you write in the blog?
I write only essays or reviews in the blog now. However, in fact, I want to write a lot of private things. I want everybody to know my feeling. I want a boyfriend recently. Because Christmas comes soon. But I don’t want ex. I like pure person. I love pure boy.
Hehehe ~! Of course I am pure girl!! You know.
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Nov 12, 2008

Free Wright: Rugby club

I like rugby club. I can't play rugby but I want to try assistant. Rugby is very hard sports, and so cool. I like it. Player almost all man but they are very kindly, friendly and funny. I practice pass the ball with player. They teach me some times.
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Brainstorm: Community Life

Community life is very important. We always need help by some people. However people not help me if I really bad person. Don’t you? I know.

People can not live alone. You too. We need love. We need family and friends.
I can not communicate some times, but I believe my family and my friends. And my family and my friends believe me.

We have difference thinking. We don’t know which true.
Some times I really confuse it problem. But it is interesting. It is life.
I think so.

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Nov 5, 2008

Mrs.Doubt

Do you know this movie? It is heart full comedy. I like it. I watched it when I was young. I though Mrs. Doubt is good housewifery and good father. I like him.
Some times we have problems about our family but we can find answer. Because we have love, we need family and we believe family love. I think so too. Family never broke up if we live another place. But children need parents, love, and house. Don’t you?

At first it begins with the problem of the divorce. A feeling did not turn them on well and was not able to solve a problem.
It is a problem of children next. Children love both a mother and a father. However, a father is unfriendly with a mother. The father loves his wife. The father cannot readily convey the thought.

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Do you know his other movie? I like his movie. Do you know World of Gourp? It is really interesting book. I take America literature. I have to watch this movie and write a report. This movie makes me think a lot of things. Life is happy. Life is sad. Life is cool. Did you see this movie? How do you think about it? It is so difficult story. It is so sad story, but we can get some things.
Please try it. You feel some things if you understand this mean.
I really recommend you it. What do you recommend me other movie?
Tell me.
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Oct 29, 2008

Essay's outline

Love
Family
children
philosophy
bond
lifestyle
working

First I will talk about love, family, children and working. I

Family

I like family. We sometimes quarrel but we can make up soon. People need family and we have to have gratitude. Family is important. If you don't have family but you can make family. It is not important blood, the most important is trust. It is very warm. People feel happy. There is big love. It is never brake. Family give a lot of things. We grow up in circle family.
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Oct 22, 2008

The Other Boleyn Girl

THE OTHER BOLEYN GIRL

Do you know this movie?
It is my favorite movies. I watched it by DVD three month ago in Minnesota. But the film is now showing in Japan. I want to watch it again. I want this DVD. Scarlet is very beautiful woman. I respect her. I want to be her. I have to diet and surgery on my face but I don't have money and my mother will sad, so I don't.
I want to be slim and pretty. I never give up!!!hahaha
I want to marry Orlando bloom. Thank you for listening.

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Our Library : My Favorite Place

I like KGU library. There are a lots of good point.
There are many books. I alway read book of a lot of kinds. I like read a book. It is very intresting and enjoy and relax.
Some times I listen to music. There is a lots of music too. I like HIP HOP and R&B. My favorite singer is Mariaha Carey but I always listen to music of a lots of kinds.

In addition, We can watch DVD. We not have to pay money. It is free. I like free. Don't you?? My favorite DVD is Scissor hands. It main acter is Jhonny Depp. He is nice man. I like him.

Almost all student comes library to study and sleep. There is very quiet. People never loud. If you like quiet or want to sleep, you must go library.

We always have many homework and essy. We need computer to write report and research by internet. There are many computers.


-many book
-music
-DVDs
-quiet
-can use computer
-large
-can study
-can be relax
-news paper
-no smoking
-do not eat
-can sleep

Oct 15, 2008

My Favorite Place Essay

My favorite place is the KGU library. There are a lot of books, CDs and DVDs. We use everyday. I can study there because there are many material and computer. We sleep at there because it is very quiet and can relax. We meeting at special room if we have group homework. I think there is very useful. I can read a lot of kinds news paper at library. I have librarian class. Librarian helps me when I confuse about my homework of librarian class. I think I am very luck girl.
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Jun 27, 2008

 First Essay about Me

Heloo!! Do you know me??? I' m Ai Matsunobu. Sorry, I late Self my introduction. I am very tomboyish, but I am a cute person who gets lonely easily very much. I go to school by my car every day. Of curse I drive. I am always chased in something. For example, it is homework and reports, tests. I understood those solutions recently. So I fight against a PC every night in a library. I am alone then. I feel that I am lonely, but I must do it because there are a lot of my must do it.

I am not lucky recently. Please give me happiness. However, I may be in love recently, because when I meet one person, I get well very much. I don' t know about my feeling yet., but I can enjoy this time. Though I do not understand the feeling of the person, it is not a problem for me. It is the first time that I became such a feeling. I am enough just to be able to talk with the person. No, but after all I want to marry the person. I love him. If it is his sake, I can do anything. If there is even him, as for me, the thing wanting has nothing.

EHEHEHEHE~!! If I say that it is a joke everything, are you angry?? I'm sorry. I love you. I really love Orlando Bloom. He is good-looking man. He participates in a charity event. He is very gentle at heart. He loves a child, too. I want to marry a person like him. This is my true feeling. How can I meet him? Tell me. I think that there is not the wonderful person like him elsewhere. I want to see him. I want to see him. Hummm......



By the way, Do you have boyfriend or girlfriend?? I have no boy friend. I think it is very good for me, because I can try a lot of things. For example I try study abroad test. I think may be I couldn't pass the study abroad test. It is not important. It is most important that I tried. I never give up, but I have to study to score up. I decide, I study hard and I go to US, I become actress. So I make friends Hollywood stars. I will see Orland Bloom, I get him to best friend.



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Jun 25, 2008

Student ID: 07260
(last five digits of
your student no.)

Portfolio for Writing III,
Section 1a [or] 1c

(See: Note 1, below)

0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, Words, and More


[embed your proto-portfolios here]

(See: Note 2, below.)

1.0. Essays

(See: Note 3, below[.])

1.1. Showcase
Short
titles
[+ links]
Dates
(yyyy.mm.dd)

W
C
L
P
M
Self-introduction
08.04.20
(250 words)
First essay about Me
2008,06,27


404



3

Movie review
08.05.04
(300 words)
SHREK!!

2008,05,07

782


1

University life
08.05.18

university life

2008.05.14

440




Another review
08.06.01
RESTAURANT

2008,05,28

437


4

Language learning
history
08.06.15

language learning history-

2008.06.11

450




Slideshow
2008.07.06
(five to ten slides)

My presentation
2008,07,07
























Totals---
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2513





Key:
¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media embedded

1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
  • [Remove these square brackets, including these remarks; identify your best essay, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]

2.0. Comments

Showcase
Titles of posts with links
Dates of comments (yyyy.mm.dd)
Numbers of words in comments
Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*




2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*



2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*




2.4. Most comments on:
Titles of posts with link
Dates of posts (yyyy.mm.dd) Total number of words in comments
Qualities of comments*[*]
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*




2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?
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2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?
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2.4.2. Any of your other posts*




2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?
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2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?---
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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain what makes them good comments.

2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?
  • ...

2.6. Additional reflections on comments

  • [Remove these square brackets, including these remarks; write out your reflections on giving and receiving comments here.]


3.0. Book Reviews

3.1. ShowcaseShort titles
with links
Dates (yyyy.mm.dd)WordsComments
Example:
Vampire Killer
07.05.16
39
1
1-01

Book Review1-01

08.04.28
87
1
1-02

book review 1-02

08,05,06

121

1
1-03

book review 1-03

08,05,06

30

1
1-04

book review 1-04


08,05,07
50

1
1-05

book review 1-05


08,05,17

49

1
1-06

BOOK REVIEW 1-06


08,06,02
66

1
1-07

Book review 1-07


08,06,02

149

1
1-08

Book review 1-08

08,06,02

115

1
1-09

Book review 1-09

08,06,24
232
1
1-10

Book review 1-10

08,06,24
377
1
1-11

Book review 1-11

08,06,29

487

1
1-12

Book review 1-12

08,06,30

260

1
1-13

Book review 1-13


08,07,02

355
1

1-14

Book review 1-14


08,07,06

403

1

1-15

Book review 1-15

08,07,10

265

1

























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TOTALS:


Note: Please calculate book review words and comments totals without the example (above).

3.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
  • [Remove these square brackets, including these remarks; identify your best book review, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]

4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media


Showcase
Yes
No
4.1. Does your blog have an archive?


4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?

4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?

4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?



4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?

5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):---
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  • "books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)


  • "essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")


  • "quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)


  • "links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)


  • "movies" (plural) AND "photos" (plural)


4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?

  • How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts?
    • ___ other labels attached to three or more posts
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  • Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below.
    • www (n)
    • xxx (m)
    • yyy (o)
    • zzz (p)
    • ...
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4.3. Links & media---
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4.3.1. Does your blog include pictures or other graphics?

  • Does your blog profile include a picture or graphic representation?


  • How many of your blog posts this semester include pictures or other graphics?
    • ___ posts including pictures or other graphics
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4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?

  • How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links?*
    • ___ posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)
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4.3.3. Does your blog include other media?

  • How many of your blog posts this semester include other media?
    • ___ posts including other media
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  • What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list them here:
    1. ...
    2. ...
    3. ...

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4.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes or enhancements that you have made on your blog this semester.
  1. ...
  2. ...
  3. ...

5.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing

  • ...

6.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors

  • ...

____________________
Notes:
  1. This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08).
  2. Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios in the footer of your blog.
  3. The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008)
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My favorite blog



Introduce myself



Yoshimi's blog is cute!! I surprised by her technique of power point. It is like a slide movie. Everyone can enjoy by Yoshimi's blog!! This blog have many cute charecter. I love cute charecter. I think I want to change my blog like her blog.



My blog is not perfect yet. I am not good at treating a machine. Of course as for the PC.  Why can the teachers use the PC skillfully in that way? I want to know. I make an effort so that a PC is usable. I took qualification of Microsoft Word 2003 . I went to the lecture every day for two weeks. However, my skill of PC is not good enough. As for the next, I try so hard that I take a qualification of the Excel.



By the way, do you have any favorite web site?? I like YouTube. Of Corse you know Youtube. I like foreign countries movie or video. I can watch movie or video on YouTube anytime. Sometimes I watched foreign countries video drama. Sometimes I watched promotion video of music and concert of singer. YouTube is very funny place. I think that it is very lucky that I can watch an overseas drama, because my house does not join wow wow and Cable Television such as SKY PerfecTV together. I forget that time passes when I look at the site. I have a favorite web site one more.
It is the site where there is shopping. I rarely do shopping on the Internet, but I am happy just to look. Do you like pretty shoes and accessories? I know. I love it, too. Can you get everything which you liked?  If you can get all the things you wanting, you are so rich.  However, I must endure shopping because I am not a rich person.  But it is free I watch a dear thing and a favorite thing, and to enjoy. I take it as always control a desire of the shopping. There is sometimes me when I cannot endure it.  How do you control a desire of the shopping?? Tell Me♪ And show me it if there is your recommended interesting web site.  I like looking for not only the shopping of clothes but also a delicious thing.  If you find the delicious thing, please teach it by all means. I want to eat various things.  If I have an chance, I want to eat the frogs.  I have eaten a tortoise. That taste is so-so.





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Jun 11, 2008

Essay-05: Personal language learning history

I learned a Jpanese language from my parents. My parents taught a simple Japanese language and a right language. I learned a Japanese language from my grandparents. My grandparents taught a difficult language and beautiful language. I love their. They are taught me useful language. I appreciate their kindly. So, I was not troubled in a kindergarten and an elementary school of language. When I was very good girl, but one day I leaned a Japanese language from one man.
That was very problem. One man is my brother. He was very bad boy. He always used the mean words. For example, fool, shit and fuck you. He was very powerful and naughty. I always followed it in the back of the my brother. So, I played trick with my brother and I said fool and shit.

I become naughty girl. My father and my mother was very angry,and said "You are girl!!!! Don't say mean words!! Please!!!" But I did not still stop it. I thinked it is very funny! I want to know mean words more. I used the mean words in the elementary school. My quarrel partner was always a boy.
However, one day I quarreled with my brother. There was my cousins. My cousins is a small boy and a small girl. They imitated the mean words to see our quarrel and used it.
I noticed it. There is not the person pleased it to be said mean words to somebody. Then I stopped that I use the mean words, but I sometimes use it.
When I am young, the habit that the body got is not readily recovered. I am sorry very much. Though I win when it was quarrelled with somebody, there cannot be the thing that favorite phrase may be bad.
The language becomes more important as I become an adult. I want to become the human being who can speak Japanese beautiful words. I learn the words of other countries with it definitely and want to come to be usable.


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