Book review 1-09

I love my gran. This book’s gran is like my gran or my grandpa. First, a car came to the house, the children ran to see. “It’s Gran.” said Kipper. They bade welcome to gran. The children helped. They took gran’s things. “What a lot of things!” said Kipper. The children liked Gran and Gran liked children. The children want to play with Gran. Gran played with the children. They played inside, but Gran couldn’t play well. So they went outside and played football, but Gran couldn’t play well too. She broke something. Gran took the children outside. They went in Gran’s old car. Wilf and Wilma went too. Gran took them to the fun park. The children began to run. They wanted to go on everything. The children went on the jumping castle. The children jumped and jumped, bound and bound. They called Gran. Gran went on the castle. She jumped and bound. They enjoyed, but Gran made a hole in the castle. The castle began to go down. A man run up. He was cross with Gran. “GO home and don’t come back.” yelled the man said. Gran was in Chip’s room. She looked at the magic key. The key was glowing. Gran picked up the key and ran into Biff’s room. The children surprised. The magic took them to a new adventure.
I want them play enjoy with Gran.

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